Comments on: The Tablet of Bliss

By: Yvonne

Yvonne — Fri, 28 Nov 2008 12:41:48 +0000

Story draws you in like a magician, humourous, innovative, full of smoke mystery and crazy mirrors. loved it

By: Rachel

Rachel — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 17:00:16 +0000

Very gritty and crazy. Story moved quickly.

By: Judy Kendall

Judy Kendall — Fri, 17 Oct 2008 16:24:57 +0000

Thanks
Great
Strong
Best thing you’ve written yet?
J

By: Martin Cooper

Martin Cooper — Wed, 15 Oct 2008 23:42:28 +0000

What a great story, very muscular and witty, each progression inventive and surprising. A real pleasure to read, it made me laugh out loud a couple of times, and it’s good to read something that feels subversive, but not obvious.

The minature in the eye is a beautiful image, and a suitable encouragement for art to affect the wider world. Perfectly judged.

By: smith3000

smith3000 — Mon, 13 Oct 2008 22:43:29 +0000

I might have to read this again a couple of times before I really get my head round it ..

But even if I don’t know exactly what you’re saying, I like the way y0u say it:

“Like wool against my skin, the air is damp and smells of beer.”

And it’s certainly a new perspective on the divine David.