Comments on: Piccadilly http://www.rainycitystories.com/2009/06/01/piccadilly A writers' map of Manchester Sat, 20 Feb 2010 18:47:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: Joel Kaye http://www.rainycitystories.com/2009/06/01/piccadilly/comment-page-1#comment-2500 Joel Kaye Mon, 08 Jun 2009 15:36:07 +0000 http://www.rainycitystories.com/?p=436#comment-2500 It's very good. I can see the sort of people they are, and I like the line about pterodactyls. The most surreal juxtaposition, though, is the Orlando, Fla. bus timetable ad next to a poem ab/t Piccadilly M/cr, like the Beach Boys waiting for the next wave on the Irwell. It’s very good. I can see the sort of people they are, and I like the line about pterodactyls.

The most surreal juxtaposition, though, is the Orlando, Fla. bus timetable ad next to a poem ab/t Piccadilly M/cr, like the Beach Boys waiting for the next wave on the Irwell.

]]> By: steve garside http://www.rainycitystories.com/2009/06/01/piccadilly/comment-page-1#comment-2477 steve garside Thu, 04 Jun 2009 12:08:46 +0000 http://www.rainycitystories.com/?p=436#comment-2477 “We’re a clumsy version of a good idea, now that is a class line - as a lyric it would work wonders : ) Really like this work conjures many images for me John thank you steve “We’re a clumsy version
of a good idea,

now that is a class line – as a lyric it would work wonders : )

Really like this work conjures many images for me John thank you

steve

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